Comments : Understandng her through Philosophy

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This is my favorite part.

    Her language has no curves
    or colors.
    She dwells on the syntax of silence,
    trying to be a subject
    when subject she can't be yet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    A really great poem^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    An honest and fantastic poem! Last stanza was brilliantly put and the line "I mind not her contemplation for our intersubjective language holds mysteries and pain" was inspiring. Wow, such talent.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Karla, your piece makes me speechless....Powerful messages in a display of wonderful words... well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Thought-provoking ! Lovely Karla

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla,

    I love the first two lines!!!

    Her language has no curves
    or colors.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    It makes me think that this person is somewhat dull in certain ways, as well as straight in her ways of thinking. The idea of colours makes me think of a vibrant personality and the curves makes me think of different ways of thinking.

    Love your poem!!!

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