This is my favorite part.

Her language has no curves
or colors.
She dwells on the syntax of silence,
trying to be a subject
when subject she can't be yet.

A really great poem^_^

An honest and fantastic poem! Last stanza was brilliantly put and the line "I mind not her contemplation for our intersubjective language holds mysteries and pain" was inspiring. Wow, such talent.

Karla, your piece makes me speechless....Powerful messages in a display of wonderful words... well done~

Thought-provoking ! Lovely Karla

Karla,

I love the first two lines!!!

Her language has no curves
or colors.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
It makes me think that this person is somewhat dull in certain ways, as well as straight in her ways of thinking. The idea of colours makes me think of a vibrant personality and the curves makes me think of different ways of thinking.

Love your poem!!!

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