Hey, this is a very exhaling piece of imagery you have formed in your poem. I think it could of maybe had a little bit more detail in the poem, well done!

WooooooooooooW!!

I am left speechless girl, I dont know what to say.
But just know you have another family here in PnQ.

XOXO

You know hun this poem really surprised me. It is terribly heartbreaking and really my mouth opened when you were talking about being abused.

Going through what you have gone through, no one should judge you for how you feel about your family. Everyone's family is different and no family is perfect.

I am sorry that this is something that you have gone through and probably are still going through. I am glad that you have vented out your thoughts through this poem but I can see why you would dislike them.

No one deserves to be treated like that, especially from the people who should be loving you the most.

x

I'm so so sorry, this must be destabilizing and tormenting for you. Such an emotional venting. Keep it strong, we're always there for each other in here. Take care, hugs.

Wow... I like it. Your just letting everything out. Cause if you let everything out, Sometimes you don't have no more stress.

This poem reall shows your feeling like clear water, nice one girl