Comments : What I Can't Have

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow this is really good am sure many people can relate :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    For a short piece this poem says alot. I am sure many readers will look at this and relate. I think there are times in everyones life when we like somone who may not like us back.

    What stood out for me about this poem was how you were to the point. You didn't mince your words you were just honest and I liked that a lot

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    For a very short poem I really like it I know how it feels to love someone who you cannot have good job