"out of shear disparity"

Shouldn't it be sheer disparity, instead of shear? Shear = scissors. :)

This piece was my favorite part:

"A place
where seeds of hope
are planted,
pruned
and picked."

For the truth and the alliteration, it was fun to read but also made me think. Sometimes people skip the pruning and picking and just place their hope with no movement. However with prune/pick, so much in your world is unleashed. Ahh. Really creative piece :)

This is simply beautiful ! ' To every end there is a beginning'

I read this piece the other morning and as I read it again im still captivated by this piece..."they bloom from wombs of hope"

^^^ how pretty is that line..... love it!!

I enjoy up beat poems, ones that are positive in wording with a touch of hope and faith. This was eloquent and beautiful
Bravo

I like the metaphor you used, I find it so true! Showing eloquence. I think this is quite an inspirational piece!! Lovely! :)

5/5

5/5. Enjoyed the flow with the metaphors. Hope is the content which keeps us lively and we are determined to move on. Beautiful.

Beautiful! I loved your word use here because it was really effective in creating a feel for what you were expressing.

"are planted,
pruned
and picked."
^LOVE all the "p's" It sounded so fun when I read it out loud.

"Releasing,
increasing,
never ceasing."
^Another great example of your wonderful word choice. I liked how this was placed towards the ending of he poem because it allowed for me to have a concrete image of hope and its longevity. When you say these words out loud, they sound like they go on forever and that can be said the same for hope..

Wonderfully done! I really enjoyed reading this :)