Comments : I am not a Normal Girl

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I don't know why would anyone wants to be normal... I like this piece. It's touching and at the sometime heart breaking.

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    The inner woman.
    Every man contains within himself the opposite gender, the Anima, which reflects his conception of the archetypal female. In this case it is the ever-giving eternal nymph locked in the tree.

    Excellent poem with the novelty of coming from the standpoint of the Anima herself, giving a voice to the muted and caged being. Whether you intended it or not, a very self-revealing work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Pain

    I guess it's not goodbye
    i know it is not the end
    I guess it's not farewell
    I guess we will meet soon
    But if I choose to stay here
    is something only time will tell.
    but the same time will chang you
    A girl can only take so much of being forgotten
    i know the feeling of being forgotten
    but maybe you never try to understand me
    So much of being ignored
    maybe i didnt try so hard
    So much of feeling like toxin
    A girl can only give
    yes but some time guy cant give something you already have it
    So much of what she didn't get
    i feel you
    So much of what she wished to get
    So much of what she begged to get.
    But I am not a normal girl
    i know your not but people like me will never undersatnd that
    It doesn't mean I'm special
    your special
    I am just a girl in love
    yes and iam the guy who just want to be loved
    Who's locked up in a kennel
    Locked away from whom she loves
    And soon to be forgotten
    im sure from one thing my heart belong to you
    But since I'm not a normal girl
    I'll forgive, and I'll forget, and I will love you to the end.

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. this is a really sad poem, but I love how you expressed these emotions... I think everyone can relate to these emotions and I don't think anyone is normal, because we all are unique in our different ways.

    Great job! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This poem kicks arse as its real emotional and really moves the reader 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Awww i really like this piece :]<3
    shows your true emotion and not alot of writers can pour emotion into their writing :]]

    great job!

    5/5 keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    "I guess it's not goodbye,

    I guess it's not farewell,

    But if I choose to stay here is something only time will tell."
    This was a great opening and the wording is excellent.
    "A girl can only take so much of being forgotten,

    So much of being ignored,

    So much of feeling like toxin."

    This is so true, I have to deal with this too much on a day to day basis.

    "A girl can only give,

    So much of what she didn't get,

    So much of what she wished to get,

    So much of what she begged to get."

    Sometimes no matter how much we beg to be loved and noticed it doesn't happen.

    "But I am not a normal girl,

    It doesn't mean I'm special,

    I am just a girl in love,

    Who's locked up in a kennel,

    Locked away from whom she loves,

    And soon to be forgotten,

    But since I'm not a normal girl,

    I'll forgive, and I'll forget, and I will love you to the end."

    And this ended really summed it all up, this was my favorite part of your write:)
    5/5