Comments : The Silhouette

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh what a beautiful piece.... love the word usage... very pretty...

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thank you very much Andrea, i'm so glad you commenting on my poems. I really appreciate, its supporting. Stay blessed and Gods blessings be with you always. Cheers!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this. It reminds me of the prayer footprints. Awesome!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks, i'm so grateful, remain blessed.. Cheers! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    This was an interesting poem, I like the twist at the end! I like how you expressed paranoid emotions, and the fear of the unknown... I think that you expressed feelings people get at times.. sometimes people are insecure and not sure what's happening and are afraid. I love the title as well!

    Great job hon :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks loads dear, I'm grateful. Blessings ;).

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks loads dear, I'm grateful. Blessings ;).

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I've read poems about our shadow before but never quite like this one. Very creative, and well worded, great flow and all around excellent poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for the comment TJ, i'm grateful. Cheers! :-).