Comments : Cargo

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    You can really change poetry into different levels each time, bro. Exalt, really. I rarely like rhyming poems, but this one.. it felt so unrestrained. I love the whole idea behind this, you being poor, with nothing significant to give to your lover.

    I love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by BearAnon

    This is great. I can see why you'd be displayed on the front page. I would pay more attention to the length of your lines with regard to the rhythm, I find some are too long and some too short. Perhaps I'm not pacing properly as I read.
    Great work, regardless.