I find this to be a great piece but it needs a few revisions. Not a big deal though on the revisions.
Just the i's need to be capitalize and a few typos.
Other than that, I like this piece.

Also there is a word that I think should be manacles rather than menacles.

I love that word :D I'm not sure why.

And the last sentence

You are in trial with the plaintiff.
Awesome, Cupid is the lawyer or the judge sort of and you are the prisoner I guess. Or the defendant.
Its kind of like the author pleads guilty for for falling in love.

Thanks for such a lovely comment and pointing out the errors, I'm grateful Cheers! :)