I read ur poem twice,I loved the way by which u hav described one of the uninspired day out frm routines_but that in a unique rythmic manner.
"Loveless day like sunless morning,Dried flowers over a solitary tomb,Life as a-Dicey Game" These particular expressions were really Impresive !
Its no doubt 5/5.
7 years ago
Very interesting read. My interpretation is that you are using these elements to describe your inner thoughts....the storm being anger and frustration?
The fact that it dies down without really reaching its peak..to me anyway..indicates that decisions have still to be made.