Hey wats wrong with ya?
I mean this simply holds a wave of raw emotions ! U made it at its best,guess its the another genius piece of Urs ! liked it,straight thru my heart !
"End-pretend,dying-crying,before-floor,feet-seat,now-how,grave-slave,wanted-haunted" Though these words end simple,they are followed by rythmic aswell as a unique assigned meaningful correspondence.
Excellent work Allie! Appericiated !

You write really good sad poems

I hope your ok cos the poems you write seem so real and depressing...but wow girl just amazginggg dats all I can say sweetie(:

5/5 again(: xx

Wow! This really touches the soul, and brings out such heartfelt emotions. Excellent piece.

I just feel that pain exposed in this piece of art...but wil only as the same question as Rihana...r u ok?

You write such sad deep poems that get to my heart great poem none the less love you <3

"and left me haunted
by nightmares of you
gently touching me."
--> I love this part

Sad and beautiful <3
5/5

-X