Comments : Life's Equation

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    I don't know if systems are always linear but I do feel maths explains the perfection of the universe . Lovely write

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great piece. This is the second time I've read a poem with math incorporated in it :b

    "Our world is composed of different people.
    But there's something that we are common."
    I love this part, but change 'are' to 'have'

    "And that greatest common factor is faith,
    We have many different gods and still we
    believe."
    I don't think I agree.. I have friends who don't have a religion/faith. But yes, everyone still believes.. That's why we're still here.

    "A solution of
    addition,subtraction,multiplication and
    division.
    It depends on the situation in choosing your
    solution."
    I agree. It will all end, but the question 'how?' depends on our solution/choice.

    Really well-written. 5/5 Keep writing :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Good job