Comments : Love ( Collab )

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I'm glad I asked to write with you because this turned out very well.Thank you for agreeing to go along with me and my "insane" idea of us working together.

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great poem. It doesn't matter what others think and they might give their opinions and all but in the end if you really love that person and they love you that is all that matters. Nice write. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was great. I liked how at first the suspense was building up then you were like" here we go". Was a nice connection for continuing the poem. All in all a great poem. And nice work with the emotion. Nice write. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I love how this poem didn't exactly rhyme all the way to the ending but I did enjoyed how two poets could make a poem so well knitted together and makes me love the poem because it does flow and I think this poem should've gone into the catagory "life" because while it does have love in it it has more life in it and it is just a motivation and a speech that's so beautiful as it was tranformed into a wonderful poem so great job to Madison and yourself for making a gift of poetry! 5/5

    -Mori