Comments : Tides from the underground

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Zahra, this is really brilliant:

    .. They unwind...
    and unravel
    as rumors begin to spread
    from the same lips that kissed the cheek!
    Truth and lies become one

    Only those who know the truth...
    see it clear

    ^ LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOve it. It's like Arabian poetry, but with an english pen. Freakin' awesome. and very true.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Amazing thoughts poured out here, Zahrah. This is very devastating, when one is betrayed for no reasons or your accused of something you know nothing about. Stabing one in the back is the most heart breaking experience, especially when it's by a loved one.

    Good message you pointed out, using traits of nature to add a beauty to it even when engross in sad moments.

    Keep up the great talent, more grease to your ink..and more wisdom to your gift. Mashallah dear, Cheers! Bisalam.. ;-).