*Giggles* At first, when I was reading, I felt the humor within but thought, wow this Is filled with life, inspiration and nature...a powerful mixture of awesome words... and I loved the message ..... and then at the end I burst out with laughter at your socks... ha ha I don't personally know if your socks are stinky, but the way you wrote the ending, I'll take your word for it.... ha ha ha ha ha

excellent piece Ian :-)

This was humourous but still got the message across...we have become so dependant on technology these days and hardly notice what nature has to offer as we go through our days at such fast pace.

Loved the ending....made me laugh out loud.

I love this poem. Funny, and with a easy to understand message.
Good job :)