Comments : Supper of Life

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This poem inspired me by keeping hope , staying optimistic, and loving life:)
    This is great:) thank u for sharing it

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Excellent imagery /metaphor to paint a picture of one's progress through life

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is cute and very inspiring. Amazing, I just can picture it

  • 12 years ago

    by Ending Credits

    Within several years of hardship
    I was able to dine upon inspiration
    drink natures rain of tears from a cup
    and have a tummy full of hope, peace

    and love....

    BRAVO!!! This was inspiring and lovely and encouraging! You didn't give up, and all your struggles have paid off! A happy ending. I really like this, Maple. It gives me hope. I hope to be there someday, dining and happy too. ^_^

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Abissah Junior

    I like the art.awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this.

    It makes me think of how we can struggle through life, how we can grow and mature. It is not just a simple poem about eating supper. Much more depth involved and I loved it!!!

    The images were awesome.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    It made think that hopes are created because of love.
    And peace is attain because of love and hoping al along. Though, peace is really hard to get when we worry for our love ones bit by hoping we get some balance. I agree with lioness. There is depth in this poem and I really like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Very intriguing write.The metaphors have depth and a very inspiring one indeed.Things start falling in place as we feel a ray of hope,which in turn gives us clarity.A heart full of love will always be in peace.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This poem is so lovely, flowing very smoothly. I like how you expressed the emotions of the subject. 'Super of Life', gives me the impression of 'Hope', been positive always. No matter how life turns out to be; a light will always lurk at the end of it all. It's an inspiring piece and relatable to all. Remain blessed, Cheers! :-).