Comments : Paper, Rock, Scissor

  • 12 years ago

    by princess

    Nice title!

  • 12 years ago

    by princess

    Nice title!

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Try to heal the scars and don't hurt yourself.

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    The title is what made me check this poem out. I see the thought behind the poem and I like it. Try working on the content. I found one of your lines too long. You could split it into two lines but keeping the same thought.
    Example:
    "it may leave scars but it shows something more.
    it shows how many times you've put me through hell"

    Something like that. Entirely up to you. I really like the idea of this piece and I'm sure you can improve it. :)