So honest, I can relate. I enjoyed the read. Thanks!

Ur emotions r strong like the feeling of sympathy u give the reader :)

Sounds like theres a bit of confusion in this and also a very sorrowful piece of poetry you have written - i beieve that in love, no one should hate themselves , but i totaly get what you mean, i've kinda been through a similar situaion. . . . but nonetheless its a good piece..keep on writing