Short, simple, and sweet.

I would suggest taking "so" out of "yet so full of light,"
AND
adding an additional blank line/space before the last line, to enhance the suspense of its delivery.

Just suggestions. Lovely as is :)

Simple but to the point.
Short and sweet and full of powerful emotions.
I relate to this poem.
I can see it in the Love Poem category as-well.
Beautifully written.
:)

Hmm...u seek here the simplicity,Guess its the outcome for feeling of something that can't be achieved,u relate it to stars...
Ur poem does not diminish from the main concerned meaning and reveals your want towards at the ending.
Really liked the phenomenons you sequenced and put through.
Nicely accomplished !