Comments : I Will Always Care

  • 7 years ago

    by Lioness

    The first part of the poem was written in past tense so I should have known it would end up sad, though the beginning did make me smile. There were beautiful words, a lovely poem.

    The second part broke my heart, two people who could not be together because of things that one of them is going through, very heartbreaking.

    Love your words though!

    x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Ya this poem is really heartbreaking:(
    But I like it:)

  • 7 years ago

    by mike ernst

    WOW
    It is like listening to a mirror in my mind

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Like a song, flows smoothly and lovingly till the end when the hammer falls and another heart is broken..
    excellent