Comments : Blind Truth

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think this depicts life in general the things we go through on a daily basis. Searching and fighting for happiness.
    Good poem indeed, with realistic words and great flow

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Hun,

    I love the words you have used in this poem. I think you have done really well with expressing your emotions. As I read this I am reflected back on when I myself have felt like this.

    Fighting for strength
    Growing weaker
    As the insults
    cut you even deeper
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    I have to say that this stanza blew me away

    The rhyming was great and the poem was easy to read and relate to.

    Well done

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