Amazing as always hun <3 5/5

I know what its like to think about the people who love you and you love...

sometimes it reallly gets to you when you feel so terrible inside,

and that no one understands :/ no matter how much you try to to the closest people to you..

well written :) nice work

Ahh...another trademark write..!
Its ur dedications and care reflected like mirror as u sail through the uncertainty.
Paras nicely arranged with a desciplined format write.U hav well expressed ur emotions, nd overall its a wonderful make.
Appreciated !!

....::...~ I love it ~...::.....

Such a beatiful poem love(:
5/5

It's a good piece. I like that you take into account all of your love ones. I hope that this letter is more towards realizing that even though we do sin, it's up to us to mend them by not committing them again. I don't think to die is the answer; I also believe that you don't think that either. At some point in our lives, we might have think about it, but really it's not the solution because that causes more pain to our family and friends and they can feel like it's their fault because they didn't do enough. I have always think about that and there is always a solution to our problems but dying is not. We just have to be patient and writing or talking about our problem could help us deal with them.

Really good read i liked it alot :) 5/5

Incredible....I liked the way your poem though a letter is structured into a poem and beautifully written about a girl who is leaving her life for all that has happened to her but still shows concern for all those people in her life,good or bad...!!
Every verse was fab..!!

Good work...:)