This piece shows multiple sides of this supposed love crap. I mean most of us have heard love hurts yet we give it a shot. Most don't make it out alive at first, but that's what makes it such an adventure. Well there is the base of the thoughts this piece provoked.

On to the piece itself: The emotion is understandable, but its not shown very strongly. The style was simple, the word choice was a bit bland, and the flow was okay. I was glad that your voice was loud and clear, and I appreciate that you spoke your mind. I think that this piece was a so-so piece. Thanks for the write.

4/5 because it was just a bit too ordinary.

~MRK