Comments : Veridical words

  • 12 years ago

    by True Happiness

    Very short......very interesting

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi
    I like your poem, it is even short but nice

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Wonderful haiku Matt! The title was awesome :) definitely an interesting piece!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Pretty good haiku or senryu, I'm not sure what is the difference between them both. But if I'm not mistaken, they both have 5,7,5 in syllables.

    This is a short but sweet piece(cool).

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Ohh this is a powerful senryu !!!
    very deep... and somberly... well done~

    (Haikus are nature based) senryu's are other...

    however this could be either now that I think about it... ha ha

    correct format for both :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love the images of rain.

    This was beautiful

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