Comments : Smiles in a frame

  • 12 years ago

    by Mag

    "I'm hiding behind lies,
    just smiles in a frame. "

    I like this part mostly, you don't want to reminisce sad moments in the future nor spread it even though you hurt now.

    Keep up good work !

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Pain breaks through my heart,
    and I sink to the floor.
    I am falling apart,
    and I can't pretend anymore.

    <This is my fav part of your poem :] its very emotional which makes it great :]

    its true u cant tell alot just by looking at a smile in a frame but looking beneath it is a different story :]

    great job!

    5/5

    <3 :]
    Tammi Toxic