oh honey,
what a wonderful poem...truely beautiful and im not just saying that through a loved up rose colourd perspective. you can go from sweet tender images and inward desires with lines such as ` Will be the love I see in your eyes `, `Two hearts and souls as one` and my favourite;
`Those gorgeous blue spheres of light
That warm me like the cloudless skies
I hope you see my love reflected back
When you look into the depths of brown`
lovingly romantic soundbites...then can go to (oh boy!!!) hot and lusty erotisism with the lines;
`One time may be slow and gentle
Soft kisses on our lips will fall
The next time will be hard and fast
Slammed up against the wall!`...
!!!thats really heating my blood here, and to think it WILL be happening in only 5dys time jus races my pulse, swells my loins!!! and has me panting...grrrrr
from the very first time i logged onto this site, over four months ago, your poetry stood out to me. in fact `just okay` was the first verse i read on here...that seems such a long time ago now honey, we seems to have come a long way together, sharing everyday thoughts, constant love yous, theology, the tears and hysterical laughter of everyday life, arguments and intense deep conversation and to think that you, my best friend, will be in my arms in a matter of hours just seems almost unbelievable, too good to be true...but it is VERY true.
your special gift, of wading through all of what can be said and then cutting it down to succinct, easy to digest but profound lines is what always impresses me, and the lines ` A marriage of two like-minded souls, No person, place nor thing can break apart.` sums us up perfectly.
our `bodys cravings` are soon to be fullfilled sweetheart and i`ll `never let you go` either...
michelle my dear sweet fiancee, your beautiful and i love you love you love you xxxooo[]==++!!

read this poem in a book honey, knowing my baby i figured you would love it, called `on your wedding day` xxx

today is the day you will always remember
the greatest in anyones life.
you`ll start off the day just two people in love
and end it as husband and wife.

it`s a brand new beginning, the start of a journey
with moments to cherish and treasure
and although there`ll be times when you both disagree
these will surely be outweighed by pleasure.

you`ll have heard many words of advice in the past
when the secrets of marriage were spoken
but you know that the answers lie hidden inside*
where the bond of true love lives unbroken*

so live happy forever as lovers and friends
it`s the dawn of a new life for you
as you stand there together with love in your eyes
from the moment you whisper, `I do`

and with God all your hopes and your dreams can be real
may success find its way to your hearts
tomorrow can bring you the greatest of joys
but today is the day it all starts.

before twelve months are out honey, you&me...love you xxx

*amen to that!

WOWWWWWW Sweetheart...that POEM...wow....so glad you found it..and you're right too, with God, not luck..love you to the ends of the earth, forever...xxxMich

oK GUYS.... you're making me sick...lol...i'm just kidding, it's great to see such love in 2 people, reminds me how me and my love used to be... maybe one day we'll be back where you two are now...good luck at the wedding, and my all your dreams come true, also michelle, i loved your poem, makes me think of when my man comes back from Iraq...i loved it and i gave you a 5 =)

*speechless* woah
lexi lou