Comments : The phonetics of feelings

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Does it mean that there is no love anymore?

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    It's great relating the sounds in grammar to feelings of love. I just love your style, and how you approach every theme. Maybe there are things that i didn't understand well, but the general impression: SUPERB

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    It is like in the end you gave everything you could and there was nothing left.

    Sad poem

    But love the images!!! Awesome metaphors.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Karla,

    I think this poem is different to a lot of love poems on the site and for me the best quality about this poem was its maturity.

    I also loved how you how you didn't go overboard and how you kept things simple.

    There is something really endearing about this poem and think it stands out compared to some of the other poems in the same category.

    5/5