Ole, here are some corrections for you to consider:

forms = form

mild breezes in stroking me gentle = mild breezes are stroking my hair, gently

A soothing write, it is. Good!

Love it

Love is coming even without dreams
^^
i really love this, it ended the poem in a great way:)
Great poem Ole:)

Hi
Thanks for you kind comments, much appriciated

I can't say how happy i am that people keep coming up with these lovely love poems...

and this is so sweet "every muscle in me is set for you" and portrayed very nicely..

well done :)

Lovely example of a love poem! It's so dreamy and imaginitive and thoughtful, I love that ending line;

love is coming even without dreams

Beautiful work. ^_^

5/5

I am so glad and humble by these comments, so nice and thanks

Ole you are a romantic, a heart filled with love and romance. It shows in your poems, each word is tender and delicate in emotions

Hi TJ

Your comments is lifting my spirit
thanks a lot for kind comment

Thaksin for a new great poem

Thanks for the kind comment
br
Ole