It's like a bird yearning to be free... to fly beyond the inner cages.
Lovely piece, too!

Whoa! -Mind Blown-
...I'm practically speechless!!!

I said PRACTICALLY :P

This IS amazing though, wish I could put how impressed I am into better structure, maybe I'll come back to re-word this, but for now, just KEEP writing!! You've got talent! :D

5/5

Uor poems are always impressive..awesum dis one

I fear that without you,
I would be a poisoned sun
or a trapped bird
trying to reach up
to no avail.

^^
To be this dependant on something or someone else is very dangerous..unless it is God.

Well written, MaryAnne:)

5/5 Ingrid

An absolutely delightful poem. It was sweet and touching. Your poems are always so gentle and gives the reader a serene feeling as we read them.