Hmm some lip gloss is yummy hahah

excellent, I love how your poems have that twist at the end.. brilliant and cherry lip gloss omg yess haha

Hmm.. yup, some lip gloss does taste good.

I wonder why? too..

Excellent Liz-

I do love your twist at the end message!! You made lip gloss sound so sensual and tasteful!! ha ha

A smooth sailing to a new feeling. great work.

Hahaha I didnt expect to see lip gloss:)

Great poem:)

:) I like this poem a lot and I thought you were on about chap stick not lip gloss

Nice flow and twist

5/5

I like how you described thoroughly and awesomely the whole small scenery of putting on lipstick. lol something inside me wants to taste the lipstick. Great write, Liz :)

Wauh, fun nice and sweet love it

:)
This was really good, it sounded so senual and explicit to begin with and then... the ending, all that for lip gloss...

but yes, some lip gloss tastes nice...

:)

That was very well written. I got a good laugh at the end :) Loved it greatly.

Overall Rating: 5/5