Comments : Better Off

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh MYYYYYY.

    I don't think enough words can describe what I think about this poem and how I felt reading it.

    I simply love this poem so much. The rawness and emotions, I could taste the hate words coming from my mouth this is brilliant.

    I ABSOLUTELY loved the line about pissing on a fire to put them out. This really speaks such true words and shows the reader exactly how you feel about this person. You despise them so much you would not think about saving their lives. I also LOVEEEEEEEEEEE the whole burning bridges driving off them instead. The blatant honesty that comes through is AWESOME.

    Wow what a way to tell someone that you do not want to be their friend anymore. That the way you care for them is not the same as it used to be.

    Great job!!!

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