Timothy, I really need to get used to your type of poetry. I read the poem a couple of times and as soon as I thought I knew what you were trying to say, I read it again and thought, no no that can't be it lol

I lovvvvvvvvve the use of the words you use though. Reading your poem at moments make me feel like I am reading a tongue twister. I think you would do so well with that form. Also the rhyming was great. It was subtle actually and not forced. Awesome!

I quite like the title - Hostage of Romanticism.

Again I feel the way you write is from the olden times. I don't know you that well but I believe you may have an old soul that comes out with your writings.

Great job Timothy!!!

x

I don't know... I just feel there is bits of sensuality in here... maybe bits of romance and drama..

Sinking ship your dainty limb,
touches to bare touch - spring it must.
Come baking and hear no doughy fun,
I know they hear not, hear some.

^ As I read this, I looove how it sounds... similar to Eminem's songs!

lovely.