Comments : Time Forgets

  • 12 years ago

    by shadow

    I love it.. i could feel your emotions and picture it in my mind

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is a beautiful poem. The imagery you created is so vivid, I could almost see it with my eyes.
    I know how hard it is to say goodbye to a friend, and this just reminded me of her :(
    This has been a good read, truly deserves a 5/5
    Keep writing :)
    -X