Im here ur poetry shows so much just talk when u need me dont b shy or embarassed

"Sometimes I feel as if death can be the only
escape,
Taking one day at a time but it never lets go
of me,"
I like how you penned death is inescapable and you live day by day but it won't let go of you. Maybe it's always on your mind. It's on my mind most of the time too..

"put me in the ground allow me to return
within the hurt kill me so I can escape this
place I have come to known."
change known to know. other than that, i love how you ended this.

well-written 5/5 :)

-X