Comments : Garden of the Night (Terza Rima)

  • 10 years ago

    by Victoria Nojang

    I can feel the pain in depth within the lines, though darkness seems to have stolen away love and all
    hope seems lost, tomorrow comes with bliss.
    wow I love the poem, the power of the words, the gloomy image it portrays and the hope it conveys.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Always such a pleasure to read a poem by you, Luanne:)

    Your formatted poetry is never forced, so cleverly crafted and all words adding to the message.

    Yesterday may shiver leaves brittle with cold
    yet tomorrow brings promise worthy to hold

    As long as we are able to have this hope, we will keep on striving to make ourselves and our loved ones a beautiful life:)

    Well done!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Steven Beesley


    Been sometime! This is such a haunting yet enchanting piece you have written. Nicely flowing in the difficult constraints of the form.

    Beautifully penned.

    Warm regards,