Comments : Death Hangs Over This House

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very sad write. In my minds eye I could see family members arguing over things that they want. Or over whats been left to others. Death is sad, but also the catalysis for family feuds.
    Excellent write Anna

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This poem ways heavy on the heart.... very touching write!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This could easily been put in the dark section Anna.
    What I see: Angels of death(more than one?) in UNHOLY dark...who are these angels ..Adult children perhaps? there are 2 people getting ready to die, but why 2 at the same time? Suicide Murder old age...
    This poem makes me think and I like that. Nice piece Anna

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I've just lost someone close to me. This reminds me of how we coped without him. Very beautiful poem.
    I hope you keep writing :)
    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This reminds one that death looms arounds us always. Lovely description of death, portrayed simply with sad elements. Penned lovely with in depth meanings. Blessings to you, Cheers! :-)..