Generally speaking, I'm always fond of your romantic pieces because they portray so many scenes in this life, those we find hard to express.
I suggest in the ending, it is 'passion is' without the 's' in passion.

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Thanks for you kind comment, even without the (s), smiling, love your kind way, really an inspiration for me

I have been there at Tivoli, never seen a more beautiful description, amazed