Comments : Chance

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This is another strong piece that you've written. The imagery used in it is astonishing, completely blew me away!
    My favorite stanza has to be
    "In material and ashes, embodied
    The will is afraid, frail
    Inside a vast labyrinth casting confound
    Permit hindrance of singular chance."

    Absolutely amazing <3