I have the habit of reading poems without seeing the category first and I found this one to be really dark. "gore pool" sounds dark. I can't believe is an acrostic since everything sounds so smooth.

When you release the beauty of nature, you can get down with dark and chilling with the best of poets. Excellent

This absolutely left me breathless. So intense and its engaging. I love it... TJ said it best, you can definitely bring out the dark side of nature.

This a beautiful poem, I like the connection of darknes and nature very creative :)

You beautifully framed this dark poetry within formed poetry ! Excellent !(Dat your feet in da profile pic? :)

This is quite a dark poem and not your usual type of write. It is different from you and I like that.

Great rhyming. Awesome images.
Loved it.

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Prolific writing, awesome.

I like the vocab and was well written it paints alot of images in my mind :) great job

Excellent!