Comments : Without ears

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Without ears-
    I keep talking to you,
    With knowing that,
    Your ears are no more there,
    To listen to me.

    ^ .... I keep talking to you, knowing that, your ears are no more there to listen.

    --- maybe some wouldn't love the repetition of 'listen' - 'papers' and 'words' .. but I like them. they gave way to emphasizing the idea of the lover not listenting.