Liked it ver much flowed well

The rhymes are great!
The story is stange...and sad!
But I loved it!

The girl should never lose hope and I know the girl in this poem is in immense pain. The fact is that words can never heal her pain, however still it is nice to see that the girl is always expressing her true feelings.
It is a touching poem and I loved reading it.

I love the flow of your poem and the rhymes don't seem forced. I just hope you're not talking about yourself here, or someone you love.
All in all, a great read. Keep writing!
-X

Amazing as always <3

Wow the rhyming was beatiful I love this poem

She finally breaks from the pain
As she crumples down in the rain.
Her eyes never seeing the light of day
All because of the words you'd say.

^^
Favorite stanza
It was just amazging the flow and the rhyme!!

I loved it, great job
5/5 <3

Everything up to
She walked into the downstairs,
Knowing that nobody cares.
describes exactly how i feel. its a very good read i like it 5/5

I had chills reading this. Love it! 5/5

Peace

StopTheMadness

Pretty :)

Amazing, amazing poem. Your words are truly wonderful. 5/5

Truly amazing poem... wish i could write like that again... really bad writers block these days :(

Aww this is sad but its so beautifully written :]

i love it :]]

keep on writing ;]]

5/5

This poem remind me of myself...great job on it