Comments : The Electricity of Words (diary excerpt)

  • 10 years ago

    by L

    "Give me an answer, a name. Tell me it's a game, just tell me it won't stay the same. It takes so little to change the world, and given I believe each person is a world of their own.. are my desires so surreal?"

    --- you have some interesting ideas in here, so you do believe that people can change and That it might not take too long for it to happen. I also believe that. I just hope that the change is for the better.

    "A picture is worth a thousand words, yet when I write a poem, I try to paint a picture with them. Each word you speak in conjunction with another paints a thousand pictures, and when lined up with one another like a mosaic, it defines your ideas, your character, your existence, and even those that surround you."

    ----I couldn't agree more with the above. I also think so too. Thought it takes a while to understand what happens around each picture and also depending on the perspective or the angle in which each picture is taken the meaning might be distorted so the same thing can happen with words.

    ----You have some pretty interesting ideas in piece. I like that. Though try to not lose the perception of your own world when you start knowing another one. Try to always know your roots and never forget them because from then we live and We learn and appreciate more about life. That's as much as I can say.

  • 10 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    This was really astonishing. this is awesome. going onto my favorites

  • 10 years ago

    by Judy kumar

    So this is like from your own dairy? do you have more, im sorry this is my first piece thats yours and its beautiful , im asking because i write dairy pieces too and im unsure if i should paste them online because i write them when im absolutly mad, but this is great, deep, dark, and beautiful.