Wow this was so heart touching and soo sad!

I know it's yourself you want to kill,
And your heartseems empty and nothing can fill.

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That stanza was so sad, you killing yourself cos ur heart is hurt and empty and nothing will ever fill it , just how u wrote it was beatiful

You're stronger than you think you are,
You're bright and shining like a star.

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That was so beautifully sad love,
You stronger than u may know
Ur shining bright, wow so beatiful like always (:

Great job love
5/5

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Thanks for writing this one Angel. You know where I stand right now and I need this. I'm sorry if your mad at me. I couldn't open up today. But this poem has saved me for now. Lov u girlie
R.

Great poem!I loved it!:)