Comments : I want a life

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    This is wonderful. The rhyme scheme creates such a smooth flow and you explain the title throughout the poem. It is simple yet meaningful..........'Deal with the life I've got'-a positive mature way of thinking. Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I'm sorry girlie... i wish they'd let you. But this poem really illustrates your frustration. Gorgeous darilng <3 5/5