Comments : Confusion ~ Essentially Without Category

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    The mind is a mystery...
    I have nothing else to say. Great poem, but just a tiny error:

    My mind was once a furtive ground,
    so i saught an answer to life.
    --> should be "sought"

    But all in all an excellent poem, nice rhythm and flow 5/5

    -X