Comments : Butterfly Screams

  • 7 years ago

    by Breely

    Loved every inch of it. Very well written, beautiful description! Loved everything about it :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I can't really choose my favorite lines/stanza. Every line stood out. I'm glad someone appreciates art and can put those emotions in a poem. The imagery, flow, meter, and everything else in this poem is flawless. Definitely going to my favorites. I can read this over and over again haha. 5/5 :) Keep writing!

    -X

  • 7 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    This entire poem is my favorite! Its so sad, but so many people go through it! I love how you said you put on makeup to hide the pain so others wont see... I love it <3 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Max

    This is a master piece every word in it is amazing
    5/5 and favorite keep on good work =)

  • 7 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Wow! i love the raw emotion in this poem that I fed off of...it was awesome, and dark......After reading some of your other poems I did notice you do like to change up your style, i really liked that, it's a creative piece..and very deeply saddening. . . oh and I absolutely love the title and the content went awesome with it.

    good poem :)

    5/5