Comments : On the wings of thought

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This place can only be in our minds..

    "These moments are what I live for
    And what i hope to die with"
    I love these lines :)

    "It is beyond language
    Beyond mortal reasoning
    Beyond everything"
    I love how you described this 'place'

    Excellent piece 5/5 :) Keep writing!

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Really good poem :) 5/5