That's a really sad poem. When it seems like people around you go through things easier than you.. Great atmosphere, and nice write :)

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I love the metaphor here and the poem is quite sad. I do hope that a door opens up for you and leads you on the right path.

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I think it's a matter of patience..what ever that is haha..You poem is sad and truthful for so many..

enjoyed the wording and the flow..good job bro

The doors will open sooner or later^_^

Sad poem, but its great:)

Great poem! i hope it ges better for you :]

I feel this way. 5/5

Fair very good