Comments : Why do I keep writing...

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Each of us write for our own reasons, I write beacuse of my love for words and word play.

    "I'm writing this from my heart..
    I feel so despondant about what to do..
    Everyone wants me to keep silent...but one.."

    ^^ This stanza immediately caught my attention, this is what we should all do, write from our heart, but certainly do not feel despondnant! Keep writing!

    "My heart is bleeding...my head ready to explode...
    Will God forgive me if I never told...
    Would my life become despire cause
    I couldn't tell mt story."

    ^^ Very raw and heartfelt emotions, each one of us feel like this from time to time and letting your emotions out in writing is often a Godsend. Oh, btw there seems to be a typo - "mt" I think you meant to type "my" and hit the t key.

    Chin up and carry on, you are not alone!

    Good write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Marky

    "I'm just an invisible person..
    No one of importance..
    To anyone who matters"

    To those who mind what you say don't matter. To those who matter, don't mind what you say... I understand how hard it is and I definitely know how humiliating it is. But if good comes from it, then that's something to take comfort in.
    But I challenge anyone to belittle you for not talking. It takes a hell of a lot of courage to speak up, but in ways many times more not to.

    Chin up, head up, don't let the buggers get you down.