Comments : Morning haiku

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love reading haikus :) They have different meanings and bursts with imagery, much like this one. I'm not sure if the S's are purposefully written, but I love it.

    Makes me think of an old photo on the wall being gazed at as memories are recalled..in the morning.. lol

    Well-penned 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great haiku. I thought this was great imagery with the photo. I could really see this come to life. Nice write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh the visuals i'm getting from this haiku are amazing.... a soft mist on an early morning pasture is so beautiful.... i see it in my mind and a gorgeous picture indeed!

  • 12 years ago

    by neon sunset

    Beautiful haiku. love it lots.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I love haiku's,, ever since Hellon introduced me to them. What beauty can be said in so few words. This was tranquil and gentle as a morning mist..excellent