Oh be still my heart........ Karla- You just wrote a poem that can make every woman in the world cry and all men to stop and think....

" but come
with your heart wrapped in sugar."

^^^ love that line... and the ending made even my goosebumps cry :-(
powerful piece!

This poem is awesome. I so enjoyed reading it, the flow was so beautiful and perfect. I especially like the title, it made me think of two people who each had a past with some heavy scars and have come together and their scars connecting.

I was saddened by some of the parts, the poem is brilliant!!!

x

OH Karla, you have left me speechless with this one.. *bowing to the queen* excellent

"But there is no logic or common sense right now:
there is only a woman who needs your scars to fall in love again.
(it is not my morals speaking: it is my tremulous heart imploring)"

I found this lines to be fully true and heartbreaking. I also sense some despair along the lines and love as well.

This is incredible .

Hi Karla

A solid good or splended poem, hard to read without tears and to be scared, really scared.
As usual you are writing in the emotional twilight, a diffecault place to be.

There are so many pearls in this poem.
"
you can only unleash your claws.

only a woman who needs your scars.
afraid of letting you breathing my secrets

I goes on and on, and it leaves me still with a feeling of sadness.

Do you know the songs fra Anthony and the Johnson's?

There are a line there.

A fist full of love..........

The title is a woooow, it cought my attention:)
This is really a strong poem, u wrote it perfectly:)
I love it, enjoyed reading it:)

This is really strong piece. It is very gripping and really holds the readers attention throughout.

5/5

Holy life!

(it is not my morals speaking: it is my tremulous heart imploring)

^ what?

While you can't interpret The Goddess in me,
I will remain where I am frozen and scared
for I am afraid of letting you breathing my secrets.

^ WHAT???

I only suggest here that you insert a comma after 'scared' .. and I think it should be: of letting you breathe...

--- Karla.. You already know by now that I can distinguish your style between 100000 poems. You are amazing. Your words have a special echo in my ears. Those two parts above blew me awaaaaaaaaaaaay.. And the end? omg.. it is even better. I really like how you incorporate everything from your real life into poetry, like TIME, RELIGION, MORALS... and yes,,,, this KARLA touch:

(....) using parentheses a lot. it is fabulous.

I can't handle this perfection, really.
The style is just a KILLER.

~ no bet nominate next week

This is really great ! :]]

your talented :]

i love it :]